Vanessa January 12, 1993 currently 15 years old CanadaDARK brown eyes black hair with blonde highlights 5-3 feet tall
LOVES: family & friends, almost anything with sugar in it, BBQ, hanging out, chatting on MSN, designing websites, interested in art, getting/earning money, getting entertained, vacations/holidays, the summer, ice cream, cake
HATES: gross stuff, fake people, dark chocolate, stealers, copiers, when people are annoying or mean, lots of homework, exams/tests
Sub-Domain
Name: yell-out-loud
Owner: Vanessa
Wonderful Host: Bexi (pink-kiss)
Site Made: February 17, 2008
Site Opened: Fabruery 21, 2008
Hits: hits
Online: online
Best Viewed: Internet Explorer, Text Size:Medium, Zoom:100%
Last Updated: 22/04/08.
Layout Stats
Seen on August 23, 2008. Made by Vanessa in Paint Shop Pro 8. Picture(s) of the Jonas Brothers. Printed in forget.......... Credit brushes from here. Credit for images from here. Inspiration was from here
SITENAME I like the sitename "heartlessdrama--". But the thing I'm wondering is why the word heartless? I could see the part "drama" when I visited your site the bottom of your homepage had lots of...........dramatic things. But I liked the two -- because they add kinda more to your sitename. You don't wanna just use "heartlessdrama". So that's quite good. I'll give you, 3/5.
CONTENT Your content is pretty good, I do see you give out visitor content which is helping. Something I don't understand is, why did you put the visitor content under extra? That way your visitors might not be able to see them. And calling your content different names like, "junkyard" or "much love" can be a little confusing. You need to click the page to find out what it is. I'll just give you 7/10.
WRITING Your writing is pretty good. Yet you don't write much. I think you can try giving more detail in your descriptions for your visitors. LIke on the "DISCLAMER" try saying "All things (C) copyrighted to my site unless staed." because you took Granpy's layout but credited, but you didn't write that in your disclamer. Your writing's pretty good, so you get 9/10.
FRONTPAGE I like the layout on your frontpage/homepage. Yet you didn't make it. And I was wondering what happenned to the part i've circled under:
What's with that? It's like the photo is cut. And makes a beautiful layout looks a little worse. And the bottom of your homepage, I don't like at all. It's filled with buttons and awards. It makes that whole page look very crowded. Make some other pages to put them in. This just looks so un-orginized. Please change it. I'll give you a 13/20.
ALTOGETHER I like your site altogether It gives help and yet you have a lot of other stuff for your visitors. Good job! You'll get 4/5.
Vanessa January 12, 1993 currently 15 years old Canada DARK brown eyes black hair with blonde highlights 5-3 feet tall
